In case you missed it : Guest Poem on The Write Practice

Last week I shared a poem of mine over at Write Practice as Part II of a our dialogue on good poetry. [I was a bit preoccupied, so my apologies for the late linkage.] My process for writing poetry is very visceral. My initial thoughts are what get written, and editing comes much later. The one that I've shared is in its infancy - naked as a newborn, in fact. It has a lot of maturing to do, so I need your critiques and comments.